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Im trying not to be so bad

Im trying not to be so bad, Im going not to be so good, My heart of stone and of regret, My heart is so misunderstood. They look for miracles and art, I look like something is no use, Im not an ordinary card, I can displease and can confuse My only choice how to behave, How not to fall upon my knees To be myself in this big game, To open doors with own keys. All hoodoo, witchery and spell, Please, dont reject and bear in mind, That I am full of them to dwell And I am full of them to bind, To bind my hair with ribbon tight, To tie the things, that world has made, I am the freedom, strength and light, There is no need to hide my shade. 31.07.2021

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, 10.10.2021 - 16:14
The 12th line lacks the word "my" - To open doors with my own keys. You are so gorgeous that I read "thighs" not "things" in the last verse apple give_rose
 
ʳ , 10.10.2021 - 17:14
I am grateful for your feedback, moreover, in the language of the work. As for the thighs and things, you have a funny wordplay! Im smiling!)
 

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